I know this supposed to be a serious battle but she looks so damn sexy! I love warrior women! Btw, I think the armour and all is fine. It's obvious you wanted to display her beautiful a bit, so the fact that she wouldn't be protected is off the point. Maybe she's just THAT badass.
And really, in fantasy, how often does armour actually help SAVE anyone?
I really like this one, the proportions of the main character are realistic and attractive without resorting to the fantasy proportions of stick figures, which there is nothing wrong with, it’s just nice to see a realistic one every now and again. ^_^